What should happen with my story (long but PLEASE READ)?

It sounds like a pretty good plot. Don't water it down. I think she should be the abused one in the relationship - as it mostly happens - victims tend to subconsciously go for similar partners to their abusers. The baby idea could spice things up - maybe make it Kyle's baby - after a chance meeting they had another ual encounter of course. But when she reveals it to Kyle, it turns out he's engaged to - and very much in love with - a wealthy socialite. Keep going, it could build up to be a really good story. I hope to read it some day. :-) Good luck.